Dont be dumb..

[Hum Paapi]

Vahegurooo jee

Here is another poem i wrote..its not very good...i jsut write what i feel..please sadh sangat ji..give me advice and guide me..i am a moorakh wondering aimlessly on this earth

Dont be Dumb...

As I walk this path to the shadow of death

8.4 million On a dead mans chest

We run in circles you see

Coming out of the ground of dirt

There is no end to this cycle of hurt

Walk on the path of Gursikhi

And forever be free

Give you life to the one and only

You say you don’t need him

What he has he given me?

Contemplate the Lord? How silly can you be?

He gave you everything you have

Your throw him away as he doesn’t exist

Then walking around all <Edited>

Because you didn’t get you maya

You say he doesn’t matter to you

But you don’t know, you walk on his hands.

Puthar, don’t try to be smart and get him man.

You think you’re strong with your fist?

He’ll throw you away as water in the mist

You cannot think without him

You cannot walk without him

You cannot talk without him

Shutup moorakh, you cannot breathe without him

To lose this life, you cannot afford

For you will have to wait, 8.4 million more

Join the sangat and you will always forever be

With guru ji, and the almighty

Just my two cents...

vaheguroo jee

[Son of Guru Gobind Singh Ji]

Awesome poem!

[Guest SikhForLife]

vah je vah

first line looks awfully similar to another song.. haha

wierd al ?

o wait .. but Wierd Al borrowed that line from... the Bible

great poem .. enjoyed reading it

** we should make a poetry section on the page and move all these to it **

stay in chardi kala veer!

[me moorakh mugadh]

very good, very good thinking, be allways iin chardi kalla wahegurujee bless u :D

[ms514]

Sat Sri Akal:

Good Poem!!!

I am also in support of a "Kavi Darbar" section in this website!

[Guest :)]

Waheguroo Jee Ka Khalsa!

Waheguroo Jee Kee Fateh!!

Yes, I think we should have a Poem section.

If any one else has poems they should post them because I know that it would be great. :D

Waheguroo Jee Ka Khalsa!

Waheguroo Jee Kee Fateh!!

[Balait_da_Sher]

** we should make a poetry section on the page and move all these to it **

Good Idea, since so many members are posting poems. However there is an Inspiration section already. These posts can go there.

Great poem.

[Sarbloh Soulja]

Waheguroo Jee Ka Khalsa!

Waheguroo Jee Kee Fateh!!

Big up 2 u , nice poem

Waheguroo Jee Ka Khalsa!

Waheguroo Jee Kee Fateh!! :g raz

[joga singh]

WJKK WJKF

[S1ngh]