Poem Thread

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Gurfateh-- i had an idea pop into my mind today..

We have story threads so why not a poem thread. I will start of with a four line verse and then someone continues and continues with how ever many lines ... a never ending poem..

This way you can express how you feel but in poem form!! Lets try and keep this going guys..

i'll start..

I shake myself vigorously

My lips quiver

The cold wind brushes by

Nothing but my empathy on the line

**Now someone write a few lines or a verse or even one line!! **

[Fauja]

I think of vaheguru with every breeze of cool air

I let all go, as i leave free my guru given hair

as the cold wind brushes by

it feels like satyug just one more time

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keep the thread going guys!

[Trust1]

i am filthy

not worth a second glance.

will you ever take me back?

[Fauja]

NO

hahahhaha jus kidding... of course he will

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Everywhere i go, outcast i am

Anything i ask, lost case they said.

Where do i go? My heart ran fast

[Guru Sevak]

a drizzle of amrit hit your face

your heart beat started to pick up a pace

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"Come with me" His voice had said

"I have finally arrived"

[Guru Sevak]

its your turn,

follow the guru and one day you'll learn

get up at amrit vela,

dont become no babas chela

[Guest Papi]

tired of instructing this mind,

why won't it listen?

ps. i know that dont rhyme n i dont care