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quite good actualy, seein as i was not at the dungeo..I mean school cause of christmas holidays.  I just relaxed, stayed in from the cold, watched tv, came on the forums, went on msn, nice and peaceful.

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wow really...

the kids these days never fail to amaze me......JOKES!

me went uni to do coursework...even in hols, talked on fone for about 4 hours (my fone bill is well i nearly had a mini hart attak ysday morning, came home, went giani amritpal singh jis katha.....which was amazzzing ...all about the battle of chamkaur and shaheedi...

and now cosy indoors, going sleep soon......if i can resist phoning...ahhhh *bliss*

goodnite evryone...

goodnite alice (kaur)

goodnite mary-bell (kaur)

goodnite john boy (singh)

goodnite sikh sangat

goodnite everryboodyyy!

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Things are quiet on Walton Mountain. Curious-boy (singh) and deavy-singh sandhu have gone into the forest to collect firewood for the midday meal. The girls...are preparing the meal...and having a laugh at the expense of curious-boy and deavy singh.

john k-singh is chopping wood which they bringing ever sooo slow, complains j k singh! Heera-will johnson has been missing for a whole week has come to the notice of the walton family and they are naturally concerned for his welfare, he did leave a note however that he has gone into town to find himself some real work which they find hard tobelieve....

The girls...mary disguised and co are now found to be gossiping about how they will tell balait-bill singh about the sudden disappearance of heera w j!

meanwhile deepkaur the cowgirl (the heroine) has gone out riding to link up with her fiance so that they can go find heera-w j. They seek the help of the g.i kandola -sun, who is master of jasoosi and comedy kung-fu and says he will help much to their joy.

so off they set off at midday after having their vegetarian banquet....whilst curious and s sandhu have also gotten a ride and following closely behind becoz they havent had an adventure for a while......

will heera w j be found?

keep tuned...or watch this space.....!

(btw sory for hijacking your thread disguised!) :TH:

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part deux (2)

the sun started to come down as deep kaur, fiance, g i kandola-sun curious-boy and deavy-singh sandhu entered the depths of the forest...stretching towards walton mountain.

They decied it best to make camp because riding horses in the dark would make it seem like that the nihung singhs were here! suddenly curious-boys mobile ringsand its jaspaul-jim from india.....who informs them that heera w j had told him not to tell anyone that he has actually gone to become a sant and that no one should miss him.

The whole group was quite taken aback by this new piece of information, especially s sandhu because that had been his dream all along.....ahhh welll..

anyways, sooo....fruits was picked from nearby tree and they sat telling each other stories about shaheeds.....suddenly they had movement in the trees behind them.....deep kaur took out her larger kirpan and got ready to strike....as they inched towards the place the noise came from.....g.i kandola son was about to say put it away.....when

"hey itsss me"! a voice hissed out. They looke dat one another, curious boy goe....me who?

and out came......anjaan kaur!......she said she wants to help because heera w j had took her horse without her permission, she seemed quite upset...having to walk all day long....

so then there was five of them....after doing a mini smagam with curious-boy on the tabla...the only item he bought with him , they all did ardas and went to sleep to begin the next day......the adventure had only just started.............

somewhere far away two voices speak...."there they are there its five of them bul-bijla singh....."

2nd voice hahah..."yesss master shera-g singh...i see do not worry my lord... for we have them surrounded......muhhahhahahhahah......hahahhaaaaaa!"

part 3 will be out before midday tomorow.......watch thiz space......

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part trois (3)

"give me that telscope bul-bilja.....lemmme seewhat theyre doing"

"awite awrite boss, here......jeez taklk bout got outa wrong side of....OUCH..sorryyyy (he gets a blow on the head)

"now....hmmm.... think we need to alert the others, otherwise its just two gainst them five.....what do ya reckon"......yesss lets do that....hehhehe....HEEEE!hmmm!"

"what about the singh, boss, still keep him tied up"

"hmmm....yeah yeah offcourse, he could be dangerous, seems to be showing me the eye"

"look at his badge boss....it has the initial w j, do u reckon he's a govt agent/spy?

"stop asking me questions, phone brigs-amarjeet s, we need assistance"

"right boss!"

meanhwile back at the camp site

deep decides they should make a move before it got anymore late, god knows what trouble heera may be in....so that they can go swiftly to their destination...wherever that was...

Her fiance had gone to allow the horses to have a drink from the water stream....and was bringing water for the rest on his way back. Alas he was back but seemed slightly frustrated....

"jeez these horse drink!....wheres the rest?"

"g.i kandola's in meditation on that cliff, curious- boy is keeping watch, s sandhus, dont know where and anjaan penji....umm.....anjaann penji???

"me here people....man these kirpans needed sharpening, we would have been on the losing side with the bluntness, ive done everyones...check em out!"

sure enuf the edges were glinting in the sun......

"wiked penj....kool lets tell others to hurry up, we need to get out of here!"

"deep...umm....u know about the reception in wedding..umm........heheh"

"not now!of all places, we'lll talk after, right now its not safe"

"okaayee, (turning to anjaan), she is so bossy!"

They set off with belongings on s sandhus horse, who offcourse complained why him....to which all responded because "you volunteered!"....lol.

It had been an hour of slow riding before they noticed ared flag being waved at them from afar beyond a hill......

"whats that curious-boy pointed"

"its someone wedding jeez......s.sandhu replied

evryone laughed.....

"thas highly unlikely, here in middle of nowhere, replied back anjaan"

"wonder what it is then, said deep

they decided to see maybe it was a clue to where heera w j was!.....

if only they knew......

stay tunnnned for part 4 coming in 5-6 hrs time!

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quite good actualy, seein as i was not at the dungeo..I mean school cause of christmas holidays.  I just relaxed, stayed in from the cold, watched tv, came on the forums, went on msn, nice and peaceful.

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wow really...

the kids these days never fail to amaze me......JOKES!

me went uni to do coursework...even in hols, talked on fone for about 4 hours (my fone bill is well i nearly had a mini hart attak ysday morning, came home, went giani amritpal singh jis katha.....which was amazzzing ...all about the battle of chamkaur and shaheedi...

and now cosy indoors, going sleep soon......if i can resist phoning...ahhhh *bliss*

goodnite evryone...

goodnite alice (kaur)

goodnite mary-bell (kaur)

goodnite john boy (singh)

goodnite sikh sangat

goodnite everryboodyyy!

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Things are quiet on Walton Mountain. Curious-boy (singh) and deavy-singh sandhu have gone into the forest to collect firewood for the midday meal. The girls...are preparing the meal...and having a laugh at the expense of curious-boy and deavy singh.

john k-singh is chopping wood which they bringing ever sooo slow, complains j k singh! Heera-will johnson has been missing for a whole week has come to the notice of the walton family and they are naturally concerned for his welfare, he did leave a note however that he has gone into town to find himself some real work which they find hard tobelieve....

The girls...mary disguised and co are now found to be gossiping about how they will tell balait-bill singh about the sudden disappearance of heera w j!

meanwhile deepkaur the cowgirl (the heroine) has gone out riding to link up with her fiance so that they can go find heera-w j. They seek the help of the g.i kandola -sun, who is master of jasoosi and comedy kung-fu and says he will help much to their joy.

so off they set off at midday after having their vegetarian banquet....whilst curious and s sandhu have also gotten a ride and following closely behind becoz they havent had an adventure for a while......

will heera w j be found?

keep tuned...or watch this space.....!

(btw sory for hijacking your thread disguised!) :TH:

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part deux (2)

the sun started to come down as deep kaur, fiance, g i kandola-sun curious-boy and deavy-singh sandhu entered the depths of the forest...stretching towards walton mountain.

They decied it best to make camp because riding horses in the dark would make it seem like that the nihung singhs were here! suddenly curious-boys mobile ringsand its jaspaul-jim from india.....who informs them that heera w j had told him not to tell anyone that he has actually gone to become a sant and that no one should miss him.

The whole group was quite taken aback by this new piece of information, especially s sandhu because that had been his dream all along.....ahhh welll..

anyways, sooo....fruits was picked from nearby tree and they sat telling each other stories about shaheeds.....suddenly they had movement in the trees behind them.....deep kaur took out her larger kirpan and got ready to strike....as they inched towards the place the noise came from.....g.i kandola son was about to say put it away.....when

"hey itsss me"! a voice hissed out. They looke dat one another, curious boy goe....me who?

and out came......anjaan kaur!......she said she wants to help because heera w j had took her horse without her permission, she seemed quite upset...having to walk all day long....

so then there was five of them....after doing a mini smagam with curious-boy on the tabla...the only item he bought with him , they all did ardas and went to sleep to begin the next day......the adventure had only just started.............

somewhere far away two voices speak...."there they are there its five of them bul-bijla singh....."

2nd voice hahah..."yesss master shera-g singh...i see do not worry my lord... for we have them surrounded......muhhahhahahhahah......hahahhaaaaaa!"

part 3 will be out before midday tomorow.......watch thiz space......

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part trois (3)

"give me that telscope bul-bilja.....lemmme seewhat theyre doing"

"awite awrite boss, here......jeez taklk bout got outa wrong side of....OUCH..sorryyyy (he gets a blow on the head)

"now....hmmm.... think we need to alert the others, otherwise its just two gainst them five.....what do ya reckon"......yesss lets do that....hehhehe....HEEEE!hmmm!"

"what about the singh, boss, still keep him tied up"

"hmmm....yeah yeah offcourse, he could be dangerous, seems to be showing me the eye"

"look at his badge boss....it has the initial w j, do u reckon he's a govt agent/spy?

"stop asking me questions, phone brigs-amarjeet s, we need assistance"

"right boss!"

meanhwile back at the camp site

deep decides they should make a move before it got anymore late, god knows what trouble heera may be in....so that they can go swiftly to their destination...wherever that was...

Her fiance had gone to allow the horses to have a drink from the water stream....and was bringing water for the rest on his way back. Alas he was back but seemed slightly frustrated....

"jeez these horse drink!....wheres the rest?"

"g.i kandola's in meditation on that cliff, curious- boy is keeping watch, s sandhus, dont know where and anjaan penji....umm.....anjaann penji???

"me here people....man these kirpans needed sharpening, we would have been on the losing side with the bluntness, ive done everyones...check em out!"

sure enuf the edges were glinting in the sun......

"wiked penj....kool lets tell others to hurry up, we need to get out of here!"

"deep...umm....u know about the reception in wedding..umm........heheh"

"not now!of all places, we'lll talk after, right now its not safe"

"okaayee, (turning to anjaan), she is so bossy!"

They set off with belongings on s sandhus horse, who offcourse complained why him....to which all responded because "you volunteered!"....lol.

It had been an hour of slow riding before they noticed ared flag being waved at them from afar beyond a hill......

"whats that curious-boy pointed"

"its someone wedding jeez......s.sandhu replied

evryone laughed.....

"thas highly unlikely, here in middle of nowhere, replied back anjaan"

"wonder what it is then, said deep

they decided to see maybe it was a clue to where heera w j was!.....

if only they knew......

stay tunnnned for part 4 coming in 5-6 hrs time!

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part quatre (4)

"mmmmmm hhmmmmm"

"boss....the singhs hmmming again he wants to say sumthing me thinks"

"leave him bul-bijla...he may scream like a girl"

"sir look brij amarjeet s iz here"

"hey my two best friends.....sooo this is him hey, pitiful, he talked big last yer and now look at him...hahhahahhahah"

"yeh brigs hhahahah...but we have more good news"

"hmmmm! really?"

"yes deep kaur and her companions are heading in our direction and soon enuf will reach us before the sun goes down....."

"ahhh deep kaur, ive waited a long time for this , she needs to pay for starting the war of colours with me....."

"which war boss"

"quiet bijla......"

"right men, put singh in the cave and let us get ready"

"right"

"right boss.....ehhehehhe....this iz guna be gooood"

"hahhahaha....tooo good, they are just amateurs, what will they do against our cannons!!!!" muhh hahhah hahahahahhahhaa!

down in the junglee forest......

"im hungry guys, complains deavy singh."

"we cant stop not long to go before we reach that red flag place, mayb heera wj left us a signal to find him, or maybe he's there right now beginning his sant course," replies deep.

"u guys, what if heera is in trouble,m think about it he has never gone off and not contacted anyone before, its so not like him, anjaan says....

" hmmmm....."

curious thinks nad then says..."well.....we need to be ready for whatever iz up there, what weapons do we have, 8 kirpans, an axe, 4 shields and.....hm"

"a bomb!"

everyone looks at g i kandola who said that. "yeh a bomb, i make these in my spare time.....look...."

evryine drew back from him....curipus paji's horse getting more anxious next to kandolas...

"if worst hits us we hit the worst, but first!"

"no g i we dont need that, it may go off accidently., we dont needs it......says deep

"but deepkaur. why...."

"rid of it g i.....we are enuf to handle anything, our minds and skills are enuf..."

"yeh and gatka skills," points out anjaan

"and g i i thought u were professional at kung fu," asks deeps fiance

"ohhh i just put that down to make my cv loook good"

evryone gave him a stare and then continued upwards on the hill.

stay tunnnnnned for part 5.......the duel, the fight...... the ACTION!!!!

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patience is a virtue watson....

NO.....U GOTA WAIT hahhaahhahaha.....................

part 5 will be there in bout 4 hours....im off to go shopping! ahhhh christmas eve!!!

bless*

btw ima gona watch harry potter for the 5th time..iz on at 4pm....bbc1

....and honey shrunk the kiddos iz on now according to my bro. :TH:

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patience is a virtue watson....

NO.....U GOTA WAIT  hahhaahhahaha.....................

part 5 will be there in bout 4 hours....im off to go shopping! ahhhh christmas eve!!!

bless*

btw ima gona watch harry potter for the 5th  time..iz on at 4pm....bbc1

....and honey shrunk the kiddos iz on now according to my bro. :TH:

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Urm . . Hu da hellz Watson ?

I've seen all Harry Potters . . Last one wicked :@

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me sherlock u watson...lollll

man aint seen part four (sob), might get it on dvd wen its out.

but i have seen KINGKONG..... :@

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I wana watch King Kong it lookz really good ! lol...remindz me ov my dad... lol .. nah jokes 1 He prob come beating me up again ! .. lol ...

HP4 really good ! :@

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quite good actualy, seein as i was not at the dungeo..I mean school cause of christmas holidays.  I just relaxed, stayed in from the cold, watched tv, came on the forums, went on msn, nice and peaceful.

142352[/snapback]

wow really...

the kids these days never fail to amaze me......JOKES!

me went uni to do coursework...even in hols, talked on fone for about 4 hours (my fone bill is well i nearly had a mini hart attak ysday morning, came home, went giani amritpal singh jis katha.....which was amazzzing ...all about the battle of chamkaur and shaheedi...

and now cosy indoors, going sleep soon......if i can resist phoning...ahhhh *bliss*

goodnite evryone...

goodnite alice (kaur)

goodnite mary-bell (kaur)

goodnite john boy (singh)

goodnite sikh sangat

goodnite everryboodyyy!

142360[/snapback]

Things are quiet on Walton Mountain. Curious-boy (singh) and deavy-singh sandhu have gone into the forest to collect firewood for the midday meal. The girls...are preparing the meal...and having a laugh at the expense of curious-boy and deavy singh.

john k-singh is chopping wood which they bringing ever sooo slow, complains j k singh! Heera-will johnson has been missing for a whole week has come to the notice of the walton family and they are naturally concerned for his welfare, he did leave a note however that he has gone into town to find himself some real work which they find hard tobelieve....

The girls...mary disguised and co are now found to be gossiping about how they will tell balait-bill singh about the sudden disappearance of heera w j!

meanwhile deepkaur the cowgirl (the heroine) has gone out riding to link up with her fiance so that they can go find heera-w j. They seek the help of the g.i kandola -sun, who is master of jasoosi and comedy kung-fu and says he will help much to their joy.

so off they set off at midday after having their vegetarian banquet....whilst curious and s sandhu have also gotten a ride and following closely behind becoz they havent had an adventure for a while......

will heera w j be found?

keep tuned...or watch this space.....!

(btw sory for hijacking your thread disguised!) :TH:

142513[/snapback]

part deux (2)

the sun started to come down as deep kaur, fiance, g i kandola-sun curious-boy and deavy-singh sandhu entered the depths of the forest...stretching towards walton mountain.

They decied it best to make camp because riding horses in the dark would make it seem like that the nihung singhs were here! suddenly curious-boys mobile ringsand its jaspaul-jim from india.....who informs them that heera w j had told him not to tell anyone that he has actually gone to become a sant and that no one should miss him.

The whole group was quite taken aback by this new piece of information, especially s sandhu because that had been his dream all along.....ahhh welll..

anyways, sooo....fruits was picked from nearby tree and they sat telling each other stories about shaheeds.....suddenly they had movement in the trees behind them.....deep kaur took out her larger kirpan and got ready to strike....as they inched towards the place the noise came from.....g.i kandola son was about to say put it away.....when

"hey itsss me"! a voice hissed out. They looke dat one another, curious boy goe....me who?

and out came......anjaan kaur!......she said she wants to help because heera w j had took her horse without her permission, she seemed quite upset...having to walk all day long....

so then there was five of them....after doing a mini smagam with curious-boy on the tabla...the only item he bought with him , they all did ardas and went to sleep to begin the next day......the adventure had only just started.............

somewhere far away two voices speak...."there they are there its five of them bul-bijla singh....."

2nd voice hahah..."yesss master shera-g singh...i see do not worry my lord... for we have them surrounded......muhhahhahahhahah......hahahhaaaaaa!"

part 3 will be out before midday tomorow.......watch thiz space......

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part trois (3)

"give me that telscope bul-bilja.....lemmme seewhat theyre doing"

"awite awrite boss, here......jeez taklk bout got outa wrong side of....OUCH..sorryyyy (he gets a blow on the head)

"now....hmmm.... think we need to alert the others, otherwise its just two gainst them five.....what do ya reckon"......yesss lets do that....hehhehe....HEEEE!hmmm!"

"what about the singh, boss, still keep him tied up"

"hmmm....yeah yeah offcourse, he could be dangerous, seems to be showing me the eye"

"look at his badge boss....it has the initial w j, do u reckon he's a govt agent/spy?

"stop asking me questions, phone brigs-amarjeet s, we need assistance"

"right boss!"

meanhwile back at the camp site

deep decides they should make a move before it got anymore late, god knows what trouble heera may be in....so that they can go swiftly to their destination...wherever that was...

Her fiance had gone to allow the horses to have a drink from the water stream....and was bringing water for the rest on his way back. Alas he was back but seemed slightly frustrated....

"jeez these horse drink!....wheres the rest?"

"g.i kandola's in meditation on that cliff, curious- boy is keeping watch, s sandhus, dont know where and anjaan penji....umm.....anjaann penji???

"me here people....man these kirpans needed sharpening, we would have been on the losing side with the bluntness, ive done everyones...check em out!"

sure enuf the edges were glinting in the sun......

"wiked penj....kool lets tell others to hurry up, we need to get out of here!"

"deep...umm....u know about the reception in wedding..umm........heheh"

"not now!of all places, we'lll talk after, right now its not safe"

"okaayee, (turning to anjaan), she is so bossy!"

They set off with belongings on s sandhus horse, who offcourse complained why him....to which all responded because "you volunteered!"....lol.

It had been an hour of slow riding before they noticed ared flag being waved at them from afar beyond a hill......

"whats that curious-boy pointed"

"its someone wedding jeez......s.sandhu replied

evryone laughed.....

"thas highly unlikely, here in middle of nowhere, replied back anjaan"

"wonder what it is then, said deep

they decided to see maybe it was a clue to where heera w j was!.....

if only they knew......

stay tunnnned for part 4 coming in 5-6 hrs time!

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part quatre (4)

"mmmmmm hhmmmmm"

"boss....the singhs hmmming again he wants to say sumthing me thinks"

"leave him bul-bijla...he may scream like a girl"

"sir look brij amarjeet s iz here"

"hey my two best friends.....sooo this is him hey, pitiful, he talked big last yer and now look at him...hahhahahhahah"

"yeh brigs hhahahah...but we have more good news"

"hmmmm! really?"

"yes deep kaur and her companions are heading in our direction and soon enuf will reach us before the sun goes down....."

"ahhh deep kaur, ive waited a long time for this , she needs to pay for starting the war of colours with me....."

"which war boss"

"quiet bijla......"

"right men, put singh in the cave and let us get ready"

"right"

"right boss.....ehhehehhe....this iz guna be gooood"

"hahhahaha....tooo good, they are just amateurs, what will they do against our cannons!!!!" muhh hahhah hahahahahhahhaa!

down in the junglee forest......

"im hungry guys, complains deavy singh."

"we cant stop not long to go before we reach that red flag place, mayb heera wj left us a signal to find him, or maybe he's there right now beginning his sant course," replies deep.

"u guys, what if heera is in trouble,m think about it he has never gone off and not contacted anyone before, its so not like him, anjaan says....

" hmmmm....."

curious thinks nad then says..."well.....we need to be ready for whatever iz up there, what weapons do we have, 8 kirpans, an axe, 4 shields and.....hm"

"a bomb!"

everyone looks at g i kandola who said that. "yeh a bomb, i make these in my spare time.....look...."

evryine drew back from him....curipus paji's horse getting more anxious next to kandolas...

"if worst hits us we hit the worst, but first!"

"no g i we dont need that, it may go off accidently., we dont needs it......says deep

"but deepkaur. why...."

"rid of it g i.....we are enuf to handle anything, our minds and skills are enuf..."

"yeh and gatka skills," points out anjaan

"and g i i thought u were professional at kung fu," asks deeps fiance

"ohhh i just put that down to make my cv loook good"

evryone gave him a stare and then continued upwards on the hill.

stay tunnnnnned for part 5.......the duel, the fight...... the ACTION!!!!

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(after going out, coming back, catching last few mins of small soldiers....i love that film......!! yaaa me a bigg kid!)

part cinq (5)

"BANG"

"HOLY...***P, what the hell was that", screamed kandola

"wait gettt baaaclk everyone....NOW.....WE'RE UNDER ATTACK, THEY FIRING AT US....BAAAACK NOWWW!

everone gallops back...curious and singh go right...kandola get behind a large rock, anjaankaur deepkaur and fiance take shelter behind some trees.....

"no one move till we get clued up to where they friing from., KANDOLA, check .....telescope, now please!"

"i see em.....oh my theres two singhs......but i reccognise the other one its......oh no!!!!!....brij amar...

"damn it...i knew he was behind allla this.....started deep....

"and seems like HE'S GOT HEERA!!!,...IF THATS the guy tied up!!!....i recognise that pugh anywhere....

"wait lemmme see.....yeh penji...it iz!!!!!!!!!!"

deep takes charge....RIGHT!.....curious you and sandhu gota get to heera......me and anjaan and g wiill take on the enenmy....you

kandola need to cause a distratciuon....some sorta diverison!....detonate ur bomb now!.....

"but you said no before and now....

"i aint got time...bro do it!"

"dont argue with her dude, ask me , just do as she says"

Okaaaay.......stand back.....

g. ikandola throws it in the far east direction....whislt the rest of the gang get gallop towards the enemy base!......

what happens next...

will heera be saved....

will amarajeet singh and deep kaur finallly have their long awaited duel....

will curious ever find all the answers (jokes!)

find out.....in few hours time.......

writer has gone to see harry potter and eat eat eat!!!!!

back soon guys!

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d_oh.gif u r a grrrrrt time waster ...ptbs behn

but yeah... carry on... becoz thts the best remedy for getting rid of ure "hyperculosis" LOL.gif

can i also add into ure stories..... as a co-writer :@

(i m askin' for permission....otherwise everyone will fall in)

***and no need for bombs... we (excluding me rolleyes.gif ) have our own biogas bombs :e: (i hope u get it :@ )

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